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Re: un named
Good beginning.. As the storm raged( put a comma here ) lighting illuminated the rickety dock I sat on. It shuddered and shook in the wind. I thought about my ...
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Re: 11 Years Old
Really really good. I liked it a lot, and I can tell you're very talented. The only critique I could think of is: He stripped her body down Bare of ...
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Re: newbie
Hey, I'm Jenna & I'm new too! :) Best of luck writing.
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: I'm new too!
Hey Heaven! I'm 14 and I love writing too :). Nice to meet you & I'm looking forward to reading your work.
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Hi, I'm new! :)
Hey everyone, my name's Jenna & I'm new here. I love to read and write, and I've been thinking up stories since kindergarten. Obviously since all of us are part ...
Feb 2, 2008
