jenna

I'm the asian in every picture ;) 8th grade graduation partyyy. There's Jenna from YWS standing right next to me

Kay, no more critiques please.. I'm printing the essay out & I have to hand it in tomorrow anyway.. But thanks so much to everybody who helped me!

Ahh thank you Keiraaa! I'll correct that, thanks so much. I'll definitely PM you when I post an actual storyy. I would've posted a short fiction or something more interesting ...

8/10, i like it :)

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Thanks so much to both of you.. I'm not too good at writing essays so I expected a lot more mistakes :P. I'll try my best to include everything you've ...

.. you might not understand if you haven't read the stories, but feel free to correct my tenses, grammar, comma use, etc etc etc.. Magical realism is as a type ...

Whooaaa Keira, that was really good :) Like the posters above me said, you changed tense for a second, but other than that I really really like it. Great job, ...

Hello there Jenna, welcome to YWS! If you ever need anything or have questions about the site, feel free to pm me or anyone else who has a green name ...

He realized this bean salad would not taste complete without..

10/10 .. So, so true! Hahah :)

I loved it! Especially the ending. Only one thing.. Somewhere in the middle her name went from Meggie to Maggie and back again.. Haha you should fix that :). But ...

I'm not going to repeat any critiques, and I think everyone above me has covered it all.. So other than that, very very good.. I actually teared up a little ...

I could see it being a published teen fiction book, just keep working on it!

^_^ Welcome! You picked the right place to be, this is a great community. *gasp* We like writing? Who told you our secret?? =P I like fantasy alot, what do ...