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This is definitely a beautiful poem. I love the words you used, and how you used the. It gave me a fairly clear mental image but left something up to ...

GEMMA I gave my knee a few minutes and I was able to walk, painfully of course. Saph, Wren, and I walked back to camp, the walked slowly so that ...

Hey creative, welcome to YWS! I'm Jem and I will be, well, reviewing your poem. :wink: I like it. It is quite short but it has some substance to it. ...

This really is a beautiful photograph. You title is also very original, I know I never would have come up with it. :) It is a simple photo but also ...

This poem is beautiful. I can tell your feelings and your hopes, and how they aren't real. It is a sort of bittersweet peice. There is happiness but at the ...

GEMMA Saphire was struggling, trying to pull me up. I wasn't a large girl but she certainly wasn't overly muscular either. Wren quickly scrambled up the slope and onto the ...

Intertwined hands the symbol of love. Wonder where you got that from Isha... :mrgreen: Same with the slave's accent. :P Over all I really like this story, the torturing was ...

GEMMA "If you fall, I'll catch you, Gemma." said Wren. Yeah because that was likely, I had a one in a million shot at her catching me. But I still ...

GEMMA "Shall we go on?" asked Saphire. "Yes, I think we shall." I said, linking her arm and laughing. I spotted what looked like and apple tree, it had small, ...

GEMMA "How can I help?" asked Saphire. I laughed, "I really don't know, what do you think you can do with a couple of squirrels?" "First off, pretend they aren't ...

Someone save the SB! No one has posted in forever.

Name: Benjamin (Ben) Zarr Age (11-18): 17 Gender: male Personality: A pretty at ease guy, fairly laid back. He plays soccer and the saxophone but he isn't very intense on ...

STELLA "I'm sorry Lakisha, Stella." said Kayalan quietly. Lakisha forced a smile, "Eh, it's alright..." Eli spoke for the first time in a while, "Does anyone else have the feeling ...

I would like a guy character :D, I can post later tonight.

LUCAS Ahh, a secret party I was never invited to? Crash time? I think so. It was in the other boys dorm but if a bunch of girls were able ...