jellybean

Hello, I shall be your reviewer today! :) So I agree with Snoink about the whole proofreading thing. I didn't find anything terrible wrong with your spelling/grammar. Just a couple ...

I really liked this! I didn't find any major errors grammar/spelling-wise, so you're good there. :) I think you did a marvelous job with the 2nd person perspective. I've never ...

Hello! Nitpicks first! Soldiers marched and called out battle crys in the distance. "Crys" should be "cries". Wasn't the world ending susposed to mean land splitting and Volcanos erupting hot ...

Wooo Chapter Two! First, I'll get nitpicks out of the way. I rolled out of bed and landed in a frontward break fall . The part I put in bold ...

Hello! I'm going to start off with nitpicks. Today was one of those days he actually enjoyed a silent date night with wine and silence. This is a little awkward ...

How many times did you wake up, wondering what would happen to me?

And what happens when the song suddenly changes? Will you change as well?

Yay Chapter One! This was pretty long, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I'm not going to go through and pick apart every little thing; I found some things that need ...

It's okay to love this, a never ending dance. You don't have to stop.

Fire bit at feathers; someone has fallen from grace, the onlookers say.

I've had a few blogs over the past few years. My oldest blog happened to be on MySpace, but when MySpace just got to be too much drama, I decided ...

And when you tumbled from the sky, you took a breath; angels always fall.

I think I have an idea that might work for you. I was reading this one book a long time ago and the two main characters were riding a motorcycle. ...

I am Jonah. I guess a lot of what we do is in our names. My own name reminds me of a Biblical tale in which a prophet was trapped ...

The annual Festival of Magic would have been held that last week of July, but unfortunately, for nearly the last century the festival has not been held; it shall not ...