jellybean

I'm back after more than a year. And wow, everything is so different! I like it. :)

we used to wish on stars before we grew up, but now we can't find them.

Darn it, everyone else got here before me. x) So, Lava and Grandison basically caught everything. The only other nitpick that I could find was that you use "white" a ...

Souls are fragile things, a mix of wants and needs that skin will not protect.

So I really don't have any critiques for you. I absolutely loved this poem. It was....interesting (for a lack of better words). I thought your imagery was just mind-blowing. The ...

Hello! I thought your picture thingy was really pretty! I love the flower and the font. Which font did you use? So my main issue with this is that a ...

Okay, the reviewers before me pretty much mentioned everything. I did like the suspense you created here, however it was super, super short. This reminds me of something you'd read ...

^^ Heehee. Haters gonna hate. 8) She's a heart breaker alright and I don't think she has any duct tape.

Augh! No fair! You have to continue this! I really enjoyed this, but as Lava said, some of this got a little boring. I would've liked to see some ghostly ...

Hello! I think the idea behind this is pretty cool but you need to work on a few things. First, this doesn't seem like a first chapter to me. It ...

Hello, I'm Jelly and I shall be your reviewer today. First of all, I thought this was a little too short. You also do a lot of telling instead of ...

For some reason, the beginning reminded me of the text you might see at the beginning of a movie that lets the viewer know what's going on. x) Ahem, anyway. ...

D: Creepy picture! Okay, I've never reviewed poetry before, so please bear with me. A smile smeared on my frowning face White powder covers my dark skin Inky gunk, so ...

I absolutely love haiku too. :) I wrote a bunch for National Poetry Month because I couldn't think of anything else to write. x) I think the correct name for ...

When I first started reading this, I didn't think I would be able to get into it, but then I really started to enjoy it. You have a very powerful ...