jefferyffe

This was part of a larger piece, but I appreciate the critique. I hadn't really thought about all of that, but now that you brought it up, it will certainly ...

Thanks, I appreciate constructive criticism and as for the shortness of the piece, I've been trying to write something shorter than a thousand words so I need good critiques.

Thank you. This is just the most polite critique of any of my stories. I appreciate your kindness.