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That was really good short simple and sweet. Lots of details Which is great. So yeah I really liked it !!

Love love love love love love this it is super sweet and cute and educational wow amazing you wrapped all that into one short story. I have already read some ...

Way to add a twist at the end of the story!! That was good although the first few paragraphs reminded me of a poem because you put "she was blind" ...

Thank you I will use this to help with my next copy :) !!!

This is not a true story !!! I repeat not a true story!!! :) if to was a true story she probably walked in or was bringing towels to my ...

You were right about writing the story to get it out of my mind because sometimes I forget Ideas I have and there not as good as the second time

I loved him, I always have I just didn't know it before. Then when we started dating realized it. He was unbelievably perfect. Every thing I wanted in a best ...

Oh my goodness that was really cute and sweet not to mention an awesome job with grammar and that stuff. The weird thing was It sounded like it came out ...

That was good I really like it. I think when you said I walked out of my two story house p you could just put I walked out of my ...

She sat all alone it was dark but that because the night had grown dark outside and there was no light in her cell. She started to tell her self ...

That was really good you did really good with the imagery in the story and it would be really easy to turn that into a longer story rather thAn just ...

wow! you did a really good job projecting her thoughts and feelings. and it was commical to I really enjoyed it dont really see thyat action part of it yet ...

Well I definately liked it I it had a good topic but, I got confused because your main character was hearing the screams of the dying and the vampires and ...

good cop says: very good and descriptive I like it would be good to music bad cop says : it seemed more like a poem than a song and I ...

that was funny an cute :)