jedigeek

my cheryl says awesome job she thinks you are really talented which from what I can see you are. keep on truck (and drawing ) --Jedi :)

wowza! my mom is a photographer and I watch her go on peoples "professional" sight and some arent even as good as this you gots a gift! so yAH on ...

ohmegooodness! that hen reminds me of the time my dog ate five of them and then he left one in our yaard,they were neighbors so the rest of them were ...

that was really good. Good imagery and every thing I like the concept, sort of an after they died romeo and juliet? but yeah it was cute and sweet.If only ...

that was interesting ... and not in a bad way. I like it the the pace that your writing goes. the way you wrote it was interesting too it was ...

Oh lord! this has permenently changed my views on bunnies. Haahaa dont know how I am gonna sleep at my cousins house when I know that those bunnies outside verywell ...

Just something I did out of boredom  Come to me my puzzle piece and be forever mine. For you fit so perfectly when we're intertwined. Hold me close and sing ...

The day you left was the day I died  Not physically but mentally  My soul died that day  You were gone what else did I have  A shadow settled upon ...

Thank you !!!

ThIs is a really good story, I really liked it There is a just a few capitalization Mistake though and some grammatical stuff We both tumbled to the ground, I ...

You Just Don't  listen  You are perfect , perfect for me and I know it. You are everything I want in a guy and then some. You are sweet kind ...

This does not really sound like a story to me you didn't use adjective or figurative language. If you want to submit this as a story add emotion so the ...

This does not really sound like a story to me you didn't use adjective or figurative language. If you want to submit this as a story add emotion so the ...

This story I can relate to because I always wonder who I am going to fall in love with so Iike It because of that and because your emotions were ...

This isn't grammatical stuff or spelling it's just to make it flow better a a story my thoughts are in red !! Rose felt her heart break into a million ...