jclifton

i love this story, or part of story... i know everyone's said this already but the way you create mood is EXCELLENT, and i especially feel the mood of this ...

this is a good poem, and i dont say that very often.... [i love good poems because they're so rare] i agree completely with charliebo's critique... like he said, you ...

this poem offers great insight on the symbolic existentialism that the endless bounty of the sea brings us writers.... a masterful piece, whose depth and simplicity juxtapose beautifully to create ...

i believe the quote is "a person is a person, no matter how small" i guess i could be wrong

as with poetry, i am a pretty harsh critic of fantasy, because neither type of writing really appeals to me, and both are usually pretty unoriginal (especially the latter). so ...

i must say, i didn't exactly love this poem. if you know me, you'd know i'm an extremely harsh critic of poetry, and it takes a really outstanding poem to ...

i think this is a decent poem, with a good sense of rhythm and imagery. there were several cliche's in the poem that can be overlooked but that you might ...

my first posted work here.... its supposed to be anachronistic.... suggestions for a different town name? * The dusty streets of Sprouleville had long ago turned to muck, and at ...

i like it... very well flowing and readable. you did a good job of developing interest in both the backstory and the events to come.... i can't wait to read ...

i like it... very well flowing and readable.

i like animal rights but im pretty sure animals cant feel love or joy, and their feelings of pain and fear are far different then the human perception just saying.