jcipriano1

It is magnificently written, if you wanted to know, so I would certainly not worry about that. In a sense, this passage reminds me of the film "Raising Arizona" and ...

A very dark poem that creates a sorrowful picture in my mind. I admire the end line and the over all tone of this poem. It intreagues me how one ...

It is fascinating how easily you can interpret something metaphoric into something so odd and different. I truly admire that, and you should continue to use that strategy for later ...

Certainly a very realistic and sodden view of the war that tore our country into two. It is emotional, short, and concise. I, personally would have prefered more action, but ...

It reminds me so much of a Shel Silverstien poem, very smart and witty, fun poems like these bring out the happiness in life...keep up the good work!

It was the ocean It was the sea It was their god, Their hope, Their faith, For all to seek. None could share it, Only one could bear it. For ...

A very interesting beginning. It is eloquently written and supplies the reader a vague idea of what will soon occur. The description of the extra terrestrials give them a godlike ...