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  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Help Wanted

    It is quite a short, unique story that really shows peoples greed with money. It is a little anti climatic, in the sense tha he really knows nothing about the ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Plan in Your Head

    This is a great story! It certainly shows the different perspectives of two characters, making them feel like completely different people. It definately shows how we shouldn't judge others. It ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    Without a doubt, my favorite book must be 2001: a space odyssey. If you've seen the movie, you have no idea of what I am talking about. Contrary to the ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: John Steinbeck's "Of Mice & Men"

    I read this book in one weekend (not too hard to do). It is now one of my top favorite literary works. The characters that steinbeck create are genius! It ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Books??? I need some....

    I'm not sure if it is your style of book or not, 2001 a space odyssey. Some other great books are The war of the worlds, 20,000 leagues under the ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Sunlight's Darkness Prologue

    Possible ideas for where the sand came from...Arrakis! Dune! Ha! =) but seriously it's an extremely inreaguing plot...well...plot teaser. I'm so excited to find out more! Keep writing! Faster!

    Feb 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Shorter Stories

    Haha! Reminds me of Aesop! Though very short, they can have certain dark meanings in them. I can't say which one of the two I like better. They are both ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Detective James Fredrickson

    A very suspensful beginning! Especially the part with the dead bodies and the last sentence. The only sentence that I did not like was "He freaked out". Perhaps another, less ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The History of Time

    This sends a great description of how the universe formed and is very symbolic as well (the old man waiting). Messages can be seriously woven into the descriptions with this ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Chain-Link Fence

    I am truly shocked to know that this was a true story. The writing completely captures the feel that you must have felt in this situation (Supposing it was you). ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Hector Marville Speaks

    I apologize for the spacing of the lines, even though I posted it without the spaces, It will not change. Another note...This was a limited paged, limited timed school project. ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Hector Marville Speaks

    The passenger steam train chugged forward at full speed through the windy great plains, traveling to its ultimate destination, Boston. All men and women were socializing upon this train, conversing ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Thrid Story Window

    A very nice story to go with the Harris Burdick picture. There is fantasic imagery, especially in the beginning, that gives a perfect picture, of...well, the picture. I understand that ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Zee Poetic Side Of Life

    Tell me about it. Poetry can be pretty cruel. Especially sonnets. This is a great, fun poem and really can relate to what others feel. I Look forward to seeing ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Like Father, Like Son.

    This is an unusually rare, remarkably sad poem that certainly portrays extreme amounts of emotion. The end dialogue of this poem just splits the reader's heart into two, giving the ...

    Feb 3, 2011


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart