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Re: Help Wanted
It is quite a short, unique story that really shows peoples greed with money. It is a little anti climatic, in the sense tha he really knows nothing about the ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: The Plan in Your Head
This is a great story! It certainly shows the different perspectives of two characters, making them feel like completely different people. It definately shows how we shouldn't judge others. It ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Without a doubt, my favorite book must be 2001: a space odyssey. If you've seen the movie, you have no idea of what I am talking about. Contrary to the ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: John Steinbeck's "Of Mice & Men"
I read this book in one weekend (not too hard to do). It is now one of my top favorite literary works. The characters that steinbeck create are genius! It ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Books??? I need some....
I'm not sure if it is your style of book or not, 2001 a space odyssey. Some other great books are The war of the worlds, 20,000 leagues under the ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Sunlight's Darkness Prologue
Possible ideas for where the sand came from...Arrakis! Dune! Ha! =) but seriously it's an extremely inreaguing plot...well...plot teaser. I'm so excited to find out more! Keep writing! Faster!
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Two Shorter Stories
Haha! Reminds me of Aesop! Though very short, they can have certain dark meanings in them. I can't say which one of the two I like better. They are both ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Detective James Fredrickson
A very suspensful beginning! Especially the part with the dead bodies and the last sentence. The only sentence that I did not like was "He freaked out". Perhaps another, less ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: The History of Time
This sends a great description of how the universe formed and is very symbolic as well (the old man waiting). Messages can be seriously woven into the descriptions with this ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Chain-Link Fence
I am truly shocked to know that this was a true story. The writing completely captures the feel that you must have felt in this situation (Supposing it was you). ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Hector Marville Speaks
I apologize for the spacing of the lines, even though I posted it without the spaces, It will not change. Another note...This was a limited paged, limited timed school project. ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Hector Marville Speaks
The passenger steam train chugged forward at full speed through the windy great plains, traveling to its ultimate destination, Boston. All men and women were socializing upon this train, conversing ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Thrid Story Window
A very nice story to go with the Harris Burdick picture. There is fantasic imagery, especially in the beginning, that gives a perfect picture, of...well, the picture. I understand that ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Zee Poetic Side Of Life
Tell me about it. Poetry can be pretty cruel. Especially sonnets. This is a great, fun poem and really can relate to what others feel. I Look forward to seeing ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Like Father, Like Son.
This is an unusually rare, remarkably sad poem that certainly portrays extreme amounts of emotion. The end dialogue of this poem just splits the reader's heart into two, giving the ...
Feb 3, 2011
