jazzyfingers

hey ludi... I had this feeling, a strong desire to know why the rain was refreshing... maybe you could post something like it was always warm, and the rain cooled ...

Hey fluteluvr, some things I found disturbing... for example: For me, this feeling is weak, and you need something more... painful. A tear, why not 'something clamped around my chest, ...

Ohmigod Classy! I loved it, I really really wanted to read more! It still needs a little developping, but in my opinion not much! I found only one part dull... ...