jayleighsmith

Hello there. I'm Jayleigh. First off, I feel like you make it too obvious that your MC is 'the beast'. If he isn't, there are ways you can tell the ...

I suggest pressing the edit button and putting this into a paragraph format. No one can read this jumbled mess. (just a hint if you would like reviews) I'd gladly ...

Hello, thanks for PMing me about it. I'll only review part four since all my comments for part three have been looked at. On we go. "Oh, and by the ...

Austenite, thank you so much for your review. You have no idea how much I just went, "oh crap" in my head while reading it. Everything you pointed out, I ...

OOh. Thanks for the review, guys. Liz, I'm glad you like this, and when I write more, I'll definitly pm you. Thanks for reading! Carly, thank's for the nitpicks. I ...

Thanks Pink! I'll be adding more laters, I've already doubled this. So check up on it later.

Well, you're supposed to think that Corrigan is the person from the dream that the fairy girl was talking about. He isn't going to say, "I was sent here to ...

uhm. What? Confusing you about what? How am I to know what to 'explain' if you didn't tell me?

Carlotta is Piagni's husband. But in the play that Christine and Piagni performs (Carlotta's role, but she was either fired, or got sick. Depending on the version you read/see) they ...