jayleighsmith

I laid my newly bought pages on the table between us. My ink well and pen then followed. All the while her eyes watched my every move. The woman was ...

*coughobviouscough* haha. I love it! I don't have any grammar things. Buuut my romantic cliche side thinks that kiss was lame! haha Gimme more! Anywho. I'm likeing your cliff hanger ...

Amelia-Fifteen Years Old. “That filthy, little monkey has another thing coming if he thinks he can just get away with something like this.” I stomp my muddy feet on the ...

OOh. Thanks for the review, guys. Liz, I'm glad you like this, and when I write more, I'll definitly pm you. Thanks for reading! Carly, thank's for the nitpicks. I ...

Okay, this was a little...blah. The mood wasn't all action-y like the rest. I think you should continue with whatever you were planning for seven, in this chapter. You aren't ...

Okay guys, new story. I posted the preface in this, just because it's short and I thought it'd be lonley in a post all by itself. So tell me what ...

(Author’s note. I changed Ella’s (one of the fairy queen’s) name to Nyla because it was too similar to Donella’s) Fourteen What didn’t really strike me as odd then was ...

Hello Dark Sploosh. I'm breaking a rule here. I'm listening to music while I review. Today by the smashing pumpkins needs to be listened to. Alright. You asked me a ...

Thirteen I didn’t sleep that night. The ache forming around my wrists began to spread to my knees as they pressed into the iron floor of my cage. My fingers ...

Yay another chapter. This one's a little rocky, as you said. But I really liked it, especially the cucumber thing. That's soooo cute. haha. “You,” he pointed. “Should have at ...

Tanya! Okay, excuse for why I'm way late one this. I got your pm and read this already, but then later when I came back for your review, it said ...

...why does everyone think that Kevin and Victoria would fall in love? It may just be me, but I don't see that happening. He's like her brother. Love shouldn't be ...

Pink. You didn't tell me...I don't think. Ugh, did I tell you? I got the flu. Well, off to your review. “No, what the hell did you do this time.” ...

Ugh, *snaps finger* pink made it here before me again! haha. I read it yesterday when I got your pm, but now I'm here to review. First off, your dialog ...

Once Lia returned to Dorm eighty-four, Zack had replaced Levi and there were two other students there along with Alex and Katherine. Okay. I have two issues with this sentence. ...