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Hello. My name is Jayleigh and I'll be reviewing for you this evening. I'm rusty with reviewing but I had some free time so I figured I'd stop by. Here ...

Authors Note: edited once or twice but could use some more pointers. They can't hurt. More to come. :D When your alarm goes off, it plays an awful, high pitched ...

One “The promise land,” that is what they all had called it. It was an undiscovered realm where the people of England could escape to and relish in the rich ...

She does not remember this day. She was too young; a newborn. This putrid day that cursed her family and has forever burdened her. Her birth that her mother loathed ...

Welcome, Daniel. I'm Jayleigh. How are ya' today? Anyways, welcome to the site and I'm glad you have pushy friends. This is a very good environment for constructive criticism and ...

usually spot, Usual effect on me Period. “Are you tired babe?” 'tired COMMA babe' “No, no….,” No need for a comma here. Something was holding me back from say ’my ...

Hello, I'm Jayleigh. I realize that this is a bit old, but since it was lacking in many reviews, I thought I'd take a look. (Also, it seemed interesting.) “I ...

Hello. My name is Jayleigh. Now that introductions are good and done with, off to the reviewing. This is a set alone piece of work. Personally, I feel like you'd ...

Hello, SporkPunk. I am Jayleigh. Welcome to the site!!! I have to tell you this, but is a bigggg secret and you cannot tell a soul. (I am a closet ...

experience. Like I think it is safe to say that you can use a ; here. Since, like, who ends a sentence so abruptly? 17 year old. I know it ...

Hello, I'm Jayleigh. I'm overly tired this morning, as per usual when only getting three full hours of sleep. But I have some time and I just thought I'd pop ...

Hey, Kat! I have two parts of a historical novel posted, and I'd really like to get your opinion on them. The story is called Becky and the setting, time ...

There was a drop so from the sand you could only see the very top of the house. There was a drop so...what? After swimming for a while, we got ...

It was my first day. I had entered school a week late. I had been sent to the cafeteria early to meet my student mentor. I was immersed in thoughts ...

Hey, Flower. So, I'm exhausted this morning. I'm not exactly sure why but I want to go back to sleep, really bad. But I can't and so I am here ...