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Re: The Funniest thing thats ever happened to you
Well, there is a sort of carnival...very bootleg...every year at our school in October. Three years ago, I was sitting with a few of my friends and one of them ...
Oct 14, 2009 -
Re: a ride home (1)
:thud: I had gone halfway through this...then I walked away for a second...came back, it was gone. UGH! okay...here we go...again. Oh! By the way, I'm Jayleigh and I'll do ...
Oct 14, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Three)
Carlotta is Piagni's husband. But in the play that Christine and Piagni performs (Carlotta's role, but she was either fired, or got sick. Depending on the version you read/see) they ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Three)
EDITED -Jayleigh Three Three All throughout the day, I noticed that Foster was in every one of my classes. Every time I saw him leisurely walk through the doorway, my ...
Oct 11, 2009 -
Re: Lockdown
Hello. I'm Jayleigh. And I don't have any nit picks for you because I got too wrapped up in your story. When she said she was pregnant, I literally went ...
Oct 11, 2009 -
Re: Little Voice in My Head
Hello, PuffSammy. My name is Jayleigh and I will review for you this evening. I looked down at street at the plethora of cigarette buds and other trash. Disgusting. :o ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Two)
EDITED -Jayleigh Two “Which, do we as humans, prefer? Curved objects? Or boxy objects?” I read out loud. The question seemed absurd. Once thinking about it for a moment, I ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Waiting 1920 Part 2
Hello again Kaykel. I figured, well, if I reviewed part one, only fair to review part two. So here I am...agian. Off I go... The dress flitted in all of ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Waiting 1920
Hello KayKell. I'm Jayleigh and I'll be your reviewer this morning. A gentle knock rapped at the door. Which caused Rose Marie to smear her cherry red lipstick where it ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Purple Bracelet
Hello. I'm Jayleigh and I'll review this for you. OH OH OH it's 11:11!!..ahem. sorry. Off I go... I'm sitting on the curb, in the rain, drinking from a bottle ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Hey. I'm new and not sure how to get the linky in the text box. But I just posted "Breena" in the romantic fiction forum. Could you tell me what ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: TEARS
hello, Kikaharu. I'm Jayleigh and I'll be reviewing your post today. I drop to the ground, next to the dying willow tree and start crying. I knew that he didn't ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Breena (One)
EDITED -Jayleigh One The rain fell down, tapping on the windows. Not just the rain, however, fell from the skies. The rain, so wet and heavy, caused the loose yellow ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: The Soccer Locker
Hello there. My name is Jayleigh and I am your reviewer this afternoon. Off I go... He woke up,got dressed ,ate his breakfast and hopped on the bus. This is ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Hey :)
Thanks for the welcomes Trish and Lily. Love those names! My avatar is the character Jessica from True Blood. Which is both a T.V. series and a book series. The ...
Oct 7, 2009
