jayleighsmith

Hey there Wicki. I have this super short story that I just wrote for my Writing class and wanted some feedback. Keep in mind that I was limited on page ...

Hey there! The 'hi' GIFs are amazing. I applaud you and your creativity there. I'm Jayleigh by the way... A long forgotten member of this site because my lack of ...

Hi, Audrianna. That's a nifty name there. You enjoy writing, you say? Well, you've come to the right place. I'm Jayleigh by the way. Nice meeting you. See you around ...

Hi, Prism! I'm Jayleigh. Nice to meet you. :)

Hello there, Keenan. I'm Jayleigh. And how are you today?

Hello, I'm Jayleigh. Alright so I didn't read your first chapter but I think I'm going to go do that. But before I go there are a few things I'd ...

Hello. I hope you are having a fabulous day. I've had the history channel on all day as background noise to whatever it is that I've been up to and ...

Author's note: Alright. I'm not too sure about this chapter. It may change soon. What do you think? Chapter Two Lily Blame it on the Weatherman I hear the manly ...

Hello again. I've got to say, this poem may just be better than the last one I read. However, there are a few points that I stopped and thought, "Noooo! ...

Good evening! I'm Jayleigh and I'm going to help as best I can to better your writing. First short story? I know it can be a little difficult. I've had ...

Hello there. You read my chapter so I will read yours. I hope you have a lovely day and do not take any offence to what I am about to ...

Hi. It's kind of late for me and I have to get up stupid early tomorrow, so I'm not one hundred percent that you'll come out of this review with ...

Hi. Dustan looked around, the thick smoke choked his lungs and his eyes burned like fire. Comma splice. Glancing to his left a man erupted into flames that engulfed his ...

Author's note: I know it's a bit long but it is the basic format for all of my chapters. This particular genre is new to me. This novel isn't just ...

Hello there, Subtle. I'll be your reviewer this evening. We've got a lot to cover so here we go. As far as random statements go: -Personally, I feel that you ...