jayleighsmith

EDITED -JayleighOne The rain fell down, tapping on the windows. Not just the rain, however, fell from the skies. The rain, so wet and heavy, caused the loose yellow leaves ...

EDITED -JayleighTwo “Which, do we as humans, prefer? Curved objects? Or boxy objects?” I read out loud. The question seemed absurd. Once thinking about it for a moment, I brought ...

EDITED -JayleighThree Three All throughout the day, I noticed that Foster was in every one of my classes. Every time I saw him leisurely walk through the doorway, my stomach ...

EDITED! I suggest you go back and read many of my changes. I have taken out the previous chapter four and five and put them aside for now. They are ...

(I suggest going back and reading my changes. I have fully taken out the previous chapters four and five and set them aside for now, taking only what I need. ...

(Okay, if you read this and are totally lost, that is because you haven't reread chapters four and five. They are completely different because I just did not like them. ...

(Is the pace too fast?)Seven Fawn emerged from the doors a few minutes later and stood above me. I glanced at her knee high leather boots and wondered when they ...

Alright. This one is short. And I hate that. I refuse to shorten my chapters just to get more reviews. I'd rather just hear comments instead of nitpicky reviews, even ...

Nine “My queen,” the glowing boy says in a low monotone. He holds out his hand and bends at the waist in a bow. I raise my hand and he ...

(Oh my. I forgot to tell everyone. I am considering taking out the mother's engagment and putting it in somewhere else. It is too soon. Wouldn't you agree? So. Read ...

Eleven After school, I started heading in the direction of our car when someone touched my back. I jumped and yelped at the random act. My hand flew up to ...

Twelve The next day in Psychology, Warren had a hard time sitting forward in his seat. Several times, our teacher would call on him for an answer or his opinion ...

Thirteen I didn’t sleep that night. The ache forming around my wrists began to spread to my knees as they pressed into the iron floor of my cage. My fingers ...

(Author’s note. I changed Ella’s (one of the fairy queen’s) name to Nyla because it was too similar to Donella’s)Fourteen What didn’t really strike me as odd then was how ...

Fifteen I watched her green, knee-high boots hit hard against the floor as Rayne paced. She did not even glance in my direction as she bit and pulled at ...