jasmine12

Hello! I finally made it. Sorry it took me so long. Lets get started. but so many people had brought back lurid reports of the new freak that he had ...

Sorry it took so long to get to this. well, here i go! I could barely stand the sight of him, but he was happy, I was leaving and he ...

Hey Ash. Sorry I'm so late getting to this. Heckic week here. Okay, On I go! Verionica's part was amazingly descriptive. I didn't see any real grammar mistakes. It wasn't ...

EDIT Chapter Twenty-Four I Never Said That I realized skipping school isn’t the smartest thing to be doing at the moment, but I thought the temporary relief from Cassandra’s watchful ...

Hello again!!! Yay revisions! A few things that you mussed were the Tag punctuations. I pointed most of them out to you and you caught them, but there was still ...

Hey Jessica, here as promised. First off, if posting an entire story, post the chapters individualy. You'd get more reviews. Having something so long is actualy overwelming for reviewers. Kay, ...

Chapter Twenty-Three You need our help I broke away from Nigel, though it was harder than I thought it would be. He was holding on to me as if his ...

WOOO HOOO My first reply!!! YAY! Read and reviewed. C'mon people. I can take on more than one!!!!

She crept up on her unsuspecting victim in silent stealth. Finally Comma he was going to get what he deserved. The pistol felt heavy in her hands, as she remembered ...

Chapter Twenty-Two Bad or Good? I woke to the sound of monsters killing each other with machine guns. The constant grunting and swearing of the creatures made me want to ...

Hey people! I just finished my novel, Untouched!!! (Awaiting points to post the rest) I have way to much free time on my hands so now it’s time to do ...

Hello Lucyy, I'm Jazz! =) We both knew that our fates had been meddled with too much and we just could never be together. This sentence was the only one ...

Hello VampX13. I'm Jazz! Her want was raw: she could taste it, like the tang of a fruit, in her mouth. The first time i read this, i was going ...

Just to let everyone know, I have written chapters preface through five with Veronica and William as the two main characters so those for sure will be like that. But ...

Chapter Twenty-one I Should, but I Don’t Onyx turned her attention to me. She stared at me, eyes wide. Onyx didn’t look as scary as Jessica did, but she didn’t ...