jasmine12

Hey, Suzhara. I know you posted this...last week...but I saw it in the Welcome thread and something caught my eye. Your from MA? as in...Massachusetts? :shock: Well. I'm Jas. And, ...

Hey, I'm Jas. I just thought I'd throw in my two cents here. Ben shrugged and sat beside on the bench, I think you mean 'sat beside me' ~~~~~~~~~~ “Cause ...

I was once. I didn't see it, but a bunch of people were telling me that they saw me. A few people that I had stopped talking to signed my ...

I eyes wondered upon his handsome appearance. I think you mean my eyes. ~~~~~~~~~ His smile reminds me of when we were together as newborns. Your playing with tenses here. ...

pyjamas. “You do?” My grandpa use to have blue flannel pajama pants. Is that the right spelling? I thought it was pajamas. Maybe it's both? ~~~~~~~~~ "No thankyou, George." Thank ...

This is new...still working on it. Any type of suggestions are welcome. And any type of criticisms are welcome as well. Harsh works!!!! Tenth grade at any normal high school ...

Wrapping my black ACDC towel around my neck—taking a quick whiff of its fabric scent—I scampered off to the bathroom. My friend, Addie, had bought it for my fifteenth birthday. ...

I love the additions. You did a lot better with the punctuation. I saw a very few mistakes. You has some double words. When she was in her classroom, the ...

Thank you everyone!!!!! I'm about to post the third part. I'm not exactly sure how much longer this is going to be yet. still deciding in my head. The name ...

Okay wow just just WOW!!! I loved this. Although, an Alien? Really? That's new and different. The bond between them, is what reminds me of Twilight, the conflict between species ...

I wanted to bang the phone down the desk. I couldn’t, wouldn’t , believe the words she just said to me. “What did you just say?” I asked her. I ...

As much as I hated school, I hated going home even more. School was my escape from the horrors that waited for me at my house. I could deal with ...

He told us to open our notebooks to a blank page and to start writing. He didn’t specify what to write about, just write . I stared at him as ...

I know it's short. Any ideas to make it longer? Epilogue “I would have chosen Jasper.” “I would have chose Nigel.” “I take that back, I would have made them ...

Chapter Twenty-Five A Sad Way to Go “So that’s it then? Now or never?” I asked, standing up. “I don’t know, I need to think.” “What’s there to think about? ...