jasmine12

The screams of dismay The cry of convulsion The howl of anguish The yell of tribulation But I am calm Sitting in the silence Sitting in the bedlam Waiting for ...

Hello Lucyy. I shall be your reviewer this morning. Frost covered the grass, giving it a silver sheen under the dimly lit streetlights. I had managed to find myself some ...

Hello Ashleigh Brown!!!! My name is Jas and I will be your reviewer this morning, at least, I hope it is morning for you...stupid time zones. Well, off I go... ...

Lizzie ****Part Two**** “I do not understand a word he is saying,” I whispered to my father. We were being taken on a tour of my father’s factory by the ...

Hello Untitled21. I'm Jas and I will be your reviewer for today. I knew it would kill me on the inside if he ever left me. I know this may ...

ballerina13 - Thanks for reading. This piece is for a junior project in school. The final product will be my grade. eep! heh, thanks for the advice. I'll deffinitly take ...

Hellow there, writ3erindisuis3. I'm Jas and I'll be you're reviewer today. XD I’ve spent every single year on this day alone, by myself, single, you get the point. I'm one ...

Lizzie ****Part One**** I couldn’t bear to look into the ocean any longer. We were surrounded by the cool, dark, abyss. I found myself watching, just searching the waters for ...

I'm writing a novel for school and the assignment i have is to write a historical fiction novel. I decided that i was going to write in two perspectives. One: ...

Maybe your 'small buisness' can set up a wesite. There you can advertise and branch out so that writers can find you. You can explain what exactly it is that ...

And after a few more moments of silence, Jenny decided that she would like to once again to consider her companion a friend. This was the only mistake I found. ...

There were eight of the Armani thugs standing around her place. Some where looking out the windows, others were just standing there playing with their thumbs hoping to not get ...

Hello there Vivacious. I'm Jas. This poem started out great!!! Awesome, fully intrigued. Just these three lings bugged me one small yelp . . . one little squeak . . ...

Hey there Pink. I'm Jas and I'll be your reviewer for today. Here I gooooo..... She looked around her all she saw were nurses and her mother. She never knew ...

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