jasmine12

So, I guess its a no-go on this book huh? oh well, got to have some that arent that good to have others that are great.

I've only seen it once and it was when it first came out. And yes I did cry. most of my friends cried with me. And uhm, its okay for ...

haha! your exactly right. The poem is supposed to be song lyrics for my story 'Untouched' which is around this sight somewhere. The boy who wrote the lyrics will be ...

I like this story. You do an excelent job with describing everything. shook his head violently as his thin, wrinkled, lips pursed into a tight crease. You have a comma ...

Okay I have changed it around and its still a little long but the ending is what is really bugging me. I need a few pointers for this poem/lyrics. It's ...

I started this one about a year ago. I actually finished it...which for me, is an amazing thing. I know my chapters can be a bit long, i'll work on ...

Hello. I'm new to the site too. I'm more addicted to writing than reading. I've gotten advice from every writer that i've spoken to that if you want to make ...

Hi. So we all know that Mary is a young teenager-that should be obvious-but what else? Maybe when she first see's Trey you can kind of describe him more...not like ...

okay, i read this earlier today and i couldnt think of anything to say to make it better. You decribed the feelings and his anxiety for that letter so well. ...

I have to say this is a really well written poem. I dont understand how this verse or phrase, what ever u want to call it, connects with the rest ...

This story has two narrators. Joanna and Chase. They switch every other chapter. The next chapter is a little rough so here is the first one. Hope ya like vampires/adventures/romance....i ...

Edited for length. If any confusion TELL ME! Chapter One The Funeral My dad is making me go to a funeral today. My Great Aunt Sue just passed away last ...