jasmine12

Immediately thoughts came flowing into my head of my grandmother . Comma after Immediately. What helps me out is reading my story out loud so that when I pause, i ...

I'll do my best to get the next chapter up. Mostly I post my older things when I have writers block. Which, right now, I have it bad .

Chapter Two part two continues with Chase. Please note that my spelling and grammar is far from good. Enjoy. Jo stepped forward, her bright green eyes never leaving mine as ...

Hello. I love this story and can relate to the character Amelia, I think a lot of people can. Some of the things that you describe happening to her, happens ...

Thanks for all the help and for being patient with my 'then's and 'than's and all of the typos. I edited it like crazy today. I'll get the third chapter ...

Hi. It took me a long time to review this. My dogs decided now was the perfect time to go crazy (i have three) and my mom kicked me off ...

[s]Name: Forsaken Genre: Other Fiction. Summary: A young bounty hunter gets sent to college on a secret mission to kill all vampires. Word Count: ....i dunno. its a kind of ...

This is the beginning of chapter two of my story Forsaken. Please note that my spelling and grammar isnt good at all. This story has two narrators. Joanna and Chase. ...

I have very large unrealistic goals for the next ten years. I want at least three books published (not including their sequals if they have them) At least one of ...

GASP...again. I'm really likeing this story. Keep it up!!!

What I'm actually going to do is split up the lyrics in the novel so that 1. they are shorter and 2. because of what has been said before. I ...

Okay first i want to say, i know nothing about Elvish or anything like that but i am always open to new things. Also, you pointed out that only hybrids ...

hey, good story. you either do martial arts or you spent a lot of time studying it. someone told me that you write your experiences so go experience life. and ...

Hey Carly. I just started posting things up two days ago so I'm new too. I love the Twilight saga and the Maximum Ride series. (please excuse my misspellings) I've ...

Edited for length. Basically, second part of the longer chapter two. Yes i know this is confusing everyone. Chapter Two The Dream Father Down gave my father directions to the ...