jasmine12

Thanks for the review. I might just do another chapter to see what happens. A few things before, You said to elaborate on Rex's accent, "What kind is it?" Uhm, ...

Oh, wow. I would have spent countless hours researching martial arts, but that's good. When you get the next chapter out, Pm me, because I couldn't find this earlier. Okay ...

I've updated this one, adding a bit to the end and fixing my errors. It's just a new idea that I'm toying with. I need an over all opinion, don't ...

"I need to dash out, be back in a few minutes," I said. "Is it time for Mum's medicine yet?" "In a few minutes. I'll deal with it. There's some ...

AHHH CHAPTER SEVEN!!!!!!!!!! But I didn’t know that my personal problems had travelled through the entire school. Damn those conjunctions! I sat down at the normal table with the group ...

Of course I took your advice. That's what these things are for. The second part is up and hopefully with a lot less errors. Thanks for the review for each ...

I was actually thinking about taking this part out. I'm not sure. What do you think? The parking lot was half-empty when I walked outside. The cold draft made me ...

Edited for length. Chapter Three Good-bye Forever This is it, my last day at Adams High School. I pictured a dramatic exit, where everyone came up to tell me how ...

Helloo. i just realized that every time I pointed out a conjunction to you, i spelt it wrong. Its conjunction not congunction....I spell horribly. Only two things i noticed this ...

What first got my interested was of course the title. Which is a good thing. Tess is only sixteen, normally it's at that age that girls are the most self ...

“Hiya there. Is there a free room about that me and Amelia here can use?” Amelia and I can use. Not to nit pick or anything, but at my school ...

Hello again. I just can't stop reading this story. I believe I am officially hooked.....that's a good thing. I'm going to ask you to be very braver, braver than you've ...

I am trying to keep up with this story. Haha. My computer keeps shutting down and going really slow. So here we go... I looked at her blankly. She heaved ...

I had to read Lord of the Flies for school this past year and i too found it ridiculously boring. The only thinkg i can suggest is try reading it ...

Once again, I wrote this about a year ago and began to rewrite and edit it some time ago. My spelling and grammar is really bad. Just a warning. Enjoy. ...