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I have nothing bad to say about this. Just my favorite quotes. I don't say anything. All I do is cry until I can't cry anymore. It's deep. I love ...

EDIT Chapter Six I started noticing a pattern. Every time some one said my name, there would be a random breeze. My father started to notice the draft too, but ...

No problem. I make you laugh? That's weird, all of my friends think I have no sence of humor, well only when I fall and do something stupid. Back to ...

Uhm, Merry, you stopped. This is the last part. WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? The public (aka me) wants to know more! Seriously rooting for James. I think that you are ...

I agree with the person above me. Things do seem a bit rushed. BUT! It's an easy fix. Blend in with what you've already got, just some of Sophia's thoughts. ...

I think there should have been more conversations between Sophia and the lord guy. I think the dance ended too soon and nothing was said. Also, James, yeah, totally rooting ...

Wow, uhm....can't say much about this one. Only that, Helena and Sophia say each others names a lot. Like ever sentence they say it. I haven't done any research about ...

Uhm, this James guy, what does he look like? SHOW ME not tell me, haha. It's okay I tend to do that too and get fustrated as I do. If ...

Awsome twist! I love mystery things like this. I do think it's kind of mean but hey, it keeps her guessing, year? Very well written and descriptions are great. You ...

LOVE IT! The only thing that bothered me is her dress. Depending on the time, she would have a skirt and like a pettie coat and all this other crappy ...

Oh! Oh! OH! TOTALLY HOOKED. Very well written. But, uhm what time are they in? Well, suitors should give it away, yeah? ha! I'm gonna go read the rest.

Just to let everyone know, I wrote this before after Twilight, yes. But I hadn't read the rest of the series when I finished it. So if you notice simularties, ...

Whoa! This is really good. Very touching/moving, whatever it's called. You did an excelent job with the visual, I could picture it. Walking father farther, not father. little nit pick. ...

Glad you liked it, like whoa! Uhm it may take longer for the next chapter to be posted because its mostly feelings and dialog so yeah, describing describing describing. I'll ...

EDIT Chapter Five On Monday, I had a hard time getting out of bed. It wasn’t just because of the strange dream I had, it was because I had to ...