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Re: A Bloodied Rose part three
So, I see we are switching back to modern times. Sweet!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~ We die, and live, and live and live and just keep on "living". haha, love this!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~ He ...
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Re: A Bloodied Rose part two
SOOOO I noticed you posted part three and I was like OMG OMG OMG...then I realized that uhm I hadn't read part two I'm going to read it, I might ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Forsaken Ch 3 part 1
I guess i didnt make things clear, huh. Well Uhm, I'll fix it...Thank you so much!!!!
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
Hello. Sorry this took me so long, my dad kept interrupting me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can never refuse a vampire novel...I'm addicted to them. Haha. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My name is Calla, I ...
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Re: Teenage Love
hello. :D Over all, I think it's going places. A couple things caught my attention, first was how Walker just up and knew what happened with her father, how did ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Forsaken Ch 3 part 1
Again, this is Joanna now. So, just tell me what you think. I suck with grammar. Joanna So living away from parents just means more over protective living arrangements. I ...
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Re: Forever chapter 2
Oh. I didn't realize you already posted up chapter two. Okay, as someone said before me that this sounds similar to Twilight. Been there, done that. I'm hoping that you ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Forever Chapter 1
I just wanted to say first off that the first paragraph is a bit long. Split it up because you are talking about a few different things. Also, Sunny Ville, ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: A Bittersweet Tragedy-Preface
You probably posted this a long time ago, but I'll do a quick one over for you anyway. ha! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ For me, everything looked like a Winter Wonderland. Through my ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 7
EDIT Okay, so I was bored out of my mind the other day. I was sick and couldn't go out. So I was looking up different actors and actresses that ...
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Re: Lonely Hearts-Part 3
okay. Uhm, i noticed a few small things here. I prefer black for the way I feel or white for my ghost in my dream. Wouldnt it be White for ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Trapped by Fate Ch 3 part
I did a little shopping, buying a pair of shoes and two pairs of jeans. I mostly spent my time looking at books in little book shops. I bought one ...
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Re: Alana: The life of a martial arts master (chapter 2)
hello! I am super excited to read this. It's so different from a lot of the things I've been reading and writitng, so it's good. “Beginner fighters get ready now. ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: trapped by fate ch 3 part 1
Chapter three. Part one. After putting my keys on the key rack and hanging my sweater on the coat hanger, I walked into the living room. My father was watching ...
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Re: Untouched Ch 6
Okay, so I was bored out of my mind today. I am sick and couldn't go out. So I was looking up different actors and actresses that I thought fit ...
Aug 31, 2008
