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Re: Sophia's Suitors-Chapter 5 Part 2
WHAAAAA?????? NO REVIEW FROM JASMINE??????? God I am getting SO behind. I am so sorry. I got the message and was all 'okay in two seconds' then idk something must ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Absolution
Well well well. It seems Ms Ella J. Has one of them dark sides. I'm not going to lie to you, this piece is really...disturbing? But good? Do you know ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Loss
Okay, So I have lots and lots of people to thank. All...seven?....of you. Honestly, I didn't think this short story was that good. As all one hit wonders too, I've ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Loss two
This is the second part that I wasn't really going to write, but since it made me laugh, I thought I'd post it. It isnt the same narrator, but I ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Forever chp. 3
Okay, here as promised, and i see Merry was here first...shes cool. If i point out the same thigns she does...sorry. I didn't read it. night me and dad ate ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Working Title
Hello. I am Here as promised. This is a very interesting piece. I didn't really find anything wrong with it except: “Please Adrian just listen to me.” She pleaded, edging ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Her Story
Okay, wow I realize that this was posted months ago but I can never refuse to read a short love story. I had just written a piece simular to this, ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Broken - Prologue
You mentioned this story before so I thought I'd swing by and take a look. :arrow: Fav quote because it's sooo well descripted....AWESOME!! She stood on cold stone. Her gaze ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
OOOOO 9/10 I love that band!!!!!
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Forever chapter 2
Okay. I see somethings changed here too. Off I go.... "I won't be here when you wake up tomorrow or Monday, I'll be at the station I'll be pretty late, ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Forever Chapter 1
HELLO! I'm here, finally. So sorry about the delay....Okay, it seems a lot shorter huh. And I see you took out the parts about Sunny and Cold...yeah anywho on I ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 13
OoOOoOOoh yay! Thirteen...Seriously if people keep posting good stuff, I'll never get to my own haha. Any ways Here I go!!!!!!!!! Haha, I'm glad you llike my squiggles, but I ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 12
“We’ve got a room assigned now,” she grinned at me. “No more roaming around the school looking for empty classrooms. It’s more private and the windows are blacked out. It’s ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 11
Here as promised!!! This was short and sweet. Amal is so...idk warm and friendly? good job with her character.. Where did that rocker chick go? I thought they would be ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: I Hate Emo
At my school, the emo people or 'scene' people are popular. They all mingle together. Why complain about that?
Sep 7, 2008
