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  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Sophia's Suitors-Chapter 5 Part 2

    WHAAAAA?????? NO REVIEW FROM JASMINE??????? God I am getting SO behind. I am so sorry. I got the message and was all 'okay in two seconds' then idk something must ...

    Sep 9, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Absolution

    Well well well. It seems Ms Ella J. Has one of them dark sides. I'm not going to lie to you, this piece is really...disturbing? But good? Do you know ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Loss

    Okay, So I have lots and lots of people to thank. All...seven?....of you. Honestly, I didn't think this short story was that good. As all one hit wonders too, I've ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Loss two

    This is the second part that I wasn't really going to write, but since it made me laugh, I thought I'd post it. It isnt the same narrator, but I ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forever chp. 3

    Okay, here as promised, and i see Merry was here first...shes cool. If i point out the same thigns she does...sorry. I didn't read it. night me and dad ate ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Working Title

    Hello. I am Here as promised. This is a very interesting piece. I didn't really find anything wrong with it except: “Please Adrian just listen to me.” She pleaded, edging ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Her Story

    Okay, wow I realize that this was posted months ago but I can never refuse to read a short love story. I had just written a piece simular to this, ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Broken - Prologue

    You mentioned this story before so I thought I'd swing by and take a look. :arrow: Fav quote because it's sooo well descripted....AWESOME!! She stood on cold stone. Her gaze ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    OOOOO 9/10 I love that band!!!!!

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forever chapter 2

    Okay. I see somethings changed here too. Off I go.... "I won't be here when you wake up tomorrow or Monday, I'll be at the station I'll be pretty late, ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forever Chapter 1

    HELLO! I'm here, finally. So sorry about the delay....Okay, it seems a lot shorter huh. And I see you took out the parts about Sunny and Cold...yeah anywho on I ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 13

    OoOOoOOoh yay! Thirteen...Seriously if people keep posting good stuff, I'll never get to my own haha. Any ways Here I go!!!!!!!!! Haha, I'm glad you llike my squiggles, but I ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 12

    “We’ve got a room assigned now,” she grinned at me. “No more roaming around the school looking for empty classrooms. It’s more private and the windows are blacked out. It’s ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 11

    Here as promised!!! This was short and sweet. Amal is so...idk warm and friendly? good job with her character.. Where did that rocker chick go? I thought they would be ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: I Hate Emo

    At my school, the emo people or 'scene' people are popular. They all mingle together. Why complain about that?

    Sep 7, 2008


Morning without you is a dwindled dawn.
— Emily Dickenson