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Gold star for you! *Whipes tear from eye* dayum....i wish my writing was this good...It's so easy to relate to the MC. Even though you didn't go into like massive ...

I fix! I fix! Life is so grand. Well, some one had their weaties for breakfast....a little happy much? haha ~~~~~~~~ “Are you sure? Your repetition in Bath could be ...

AHHHHHH yay!! O.O plot twist!!! Gah, now im all peeved that i have to wait for her reaction haha. Again, not many mistakes. you did an except job in the ...

Hello ello!!! SO You posted the next part...cant read that part without reading this part haha. okay on I go. Okay first off...how rude! To be her suitor then just ...

Dr. Phil!!!!!!!!!!!! Here as promised! Because, we all know how I sooo have a life and what not haha...not. Any ways, on i go. He know it couldn't be too ...

Hello, I'm Jasmine. The girl looked up. “No,” There doesn't need to be a comma after 'No' just a period. ~~~~~~~~~~ kizame wiped the dust off her finger You forgot ...

Ahhh this is crazy. My name is Jasmine too!!!!! And I too love all things vampire-related. Gah I didn't like breaking dawn as much as the rest of the series ...

Hello Anthony90 Welcome. You didn't go into much detail about yourself. What do you write? What genre? If you have any questions or you'd just like to chat, Pm me ...

Helllooooo Okay so practice....owie!!!! haha My feet are killing me!! ahahaa...anyy whooo I read this before practice and i was like awhghdghghdk she stopped writing grrrr haha okay but i ...

Sarah Sarah Sarah!!!! I'm not going to do a line by line review...I'm just not in the mood. Haha. However!!! This was really good and I was super excited about ...

Helllllllooooooo!!!! Okay, so I'm not going to do a line by line analysis here because Sarah already did that for me. Haha, GO SARAH!!! Any who...I think she talks to ...

Chapter Nine I woke in my own bed and feeling more exhausted than I ever had. I was wearing the same cloths I wore the day before. I scratched my ...

Hello. I know you posted this a few days ago, but I'd like to just do a quick one over for you. I saw that someone had already pointed out ...

Hello Juxtapose. I'm Jasmine. I've been on for some time now. I hope you like it. We are very friendly here. Okay, so you didn't really go into any details ...

Hey Kristen!!! I'm so excited!!! You posted it up, yay! Well, I thought i'd check it out again, sometimes i even miss stuff the first time. Okay here I go. ...