jasmine12

OOOOOOOKAY. So, that was good. Very discriptive. I would like to hear more about the 'partner coven' i think some more of a backstory would be needed there. dont you ...

Okay then. Hmm. I liked the dream. It was very mysterious and would stick with me as well. But you connected the dream to Michael bringing up the human incounter ...

I believe four, five, and six are the only ones you haven't gotten to yet. Part four Part Five And, Part six Within the next week, i should be posting ...

My apologise for not saying what type of review i wanted. Hmm, anything that seems silly, any mistakes or anything that you find that just doesnt work, could you point ...

****Part Two**** “I see you have taken my advice, good sir,” I boldly noted. He turned to face me, a smile so wide on his face. “Excuse me, Miss Lamport,” ...

****Part One**** “Olivia,” I called. “I am going out today.” I was looking at myself in the vanity mirror. My hair flowed in lose curls down my back. I tilted ...

Cliffhanger much???? So im guessing that this painfull cry shes hearing in the woods is whatever Isaac is? More than likely a shap shifter. very nice. I cant wait to ...

Pointed? Teeth? but. he. was. human. plot twist alert! plot twist alert! hahaha. awesome. More conflict, i assume? I just have to read on, I just have to. and i ...

Uhm, unlike Bri, I like Michael better. Nate can go...nevermind. hahahaha. anyways. again, this is short and so there isnt really much to comment on. So off i go!

Again, this is really short. grr face. I like how well you detailed everything. I love it! you are painting a lovely vampiric picture. nice nice, very nice. off i ...

Is it just me, or are your chapters becomeing shorter and shorter? One part, when Sophia is talking to Cassandra, you say yes, cassandra...but i think you meant Elena. One ...

Where is Nate??? Oh, yay! Halfway mark!!! on i go

I like this chapter. Not many can pull of the hunt. Nicely done. I love it. Nothing to critique, im afraid im of no help to you. But i like ...

Okay, yes this was just fluff, but you could have added a bit more. Not having her pass out right away, or having there been something else before she goes ...

Ah. I'm still just as confused. I think you should go back an rework the whole car thing. At first, I though Sophia was in Carmen's SUV, not in a ...