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Uhhh...totally grr and what not. Why, why do you have to write so much better than me. It's just not fair. hehe. This is totally incoherent but if you can ...

w-w-why?

oh I meant Ashton! Sorry!!!

Okay, so I got half way done reviewing this and it just randomly closed on me. I was soo mad. I hope I catch everthing that I had before..... ~~~~~~~~ ...

Chapter Eleven Bailey had forgotten to tell me about the note my father left for me. It gave me a few things to do before he came home. Bailey and ...

Okay. so earlier i was watching the history of alaska on the history channel and now its some cowboy movie..i havent been watching but it was really weird to turn ...

i read this and its like...the Brady bunch vampire style haha. Well not exactly but like everyone living together...and whats with the meat thing??? ewwie haha.. I like how you ...

A couple things. Why is the council sending a mate? is that a rule? go into details about the rules. Like in a little thought paragraph. Just to update your ...

Adam I'm liking him a little more in this chapter. He isn't as persistant..just attracted to her. excited to see what happens between them Elizabeth Her character is ver well ...

Unlike Andrew, I like how you threw the ipod thing in there. It shows that she is adapting to the modern times and shes trying to blend. Why does she ...

There. I edited it. If you still find something wrong with it, let me know. Prologue The three of us, Adam, my father, and myself were in the “turning room” ...

Chapter Ten I closed the door and turned to Jasper’s glare. “You were saying,” he said between clenched teeth. He went back into his sitting room and slammed the doors ...

Oh-Em-Ge!!!! Oh oh oh is douglas working for Kirsty???????? grr that would suck really bad. I don't get why her mom is falling apart like that...i mean obviously she's mourn ...

Awh, just when things were getting all nice nice....DAM! gosh haha. Okay, i didnt really see any mistakes here. Sorry if that isn't helpful. Ugh, what is with Kirsty? And ...

Hello!! So sorry it took so long to get to this. Here I am...fashionably late haha. ~~~~~~~ “Hi, Amelia,” beamed Susannah at me as I walked into the mentoring room. ...