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Re: Myron Jay
Hello Myron Jay. Or just Myron? Hmm... I'm Jasmine, or Jas, or Jazz. Whichever you prefer. Welcom to YWS. The title 'another brick in the wall' is what caught my ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Hi I'm new....
Hi Ashton!! Welcome to YWS!!! I'm Jasmine but you can call me Jas or Jazz. Whichever you prefer. What genres do you like writing? How about reading? Well, I look ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 1
AHHHH ALL OF MY CHAPTERS HAVE BEEN EDITED FOR LENGTH!!!! They are all shorter so there are more chapters. Go review them!!!!
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 20
Chapter Twenty “That’s disgusting,” I said, my face wrinkled to show how gross that really was. Jessica didn’t officially answer me; she just brought me downstairs to their kitchen. They ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 19
Chapter Nineteen “Is everything alright, Genna?” Jessica asked in a formal tone. “No,” I blurted. “All my friends are turning into freaking vampires.” My head started spinning and I leaned
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 18
Chapter Eighteen The Letter Bailey was sleeping on the sleigh bed. They boy could probably sleep through a nuclear holocaust. I sat cross-legged on the opposite side of the bed ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 1
Hey everyone!!!!! I'm going through all my chapters and editing them! YAY!!! So chapters 1-8 are going to be shorter and completely different!!!!!!!! If any confustion tell me!
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Remember the time? --Revised
*The moment I opened this Fall for you by secondhand senerade (or how ever you spell it) came on and i was like ... wow goes perfect-ish. Dont-cha think?* I ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)
Awesome length!!! "I need to go back for my stuff, at least the stuff that is important.” You keep saying stuff. it's okay to go into detail here. Say something ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 17
EDIT Chapter Seventeen “So what’s the deal with Bailey?” Damien and I were still in the car even though we were parked in front of a house that I assumed ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love 1 (edited)
Prologues a little small but you should have posted them separately. ~~~~~~~~ “He doesn’t like me.” I whispered to my best friend. Comma instead of period. ~~~~~~~~ “No! He doesn’t, ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 16
EDIT Chapter Sixteen “And what of the boy?” Sebastian asked Damien. We had mobed into the living room, but no one sat down. Damien and Sebastian were facing each other ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: the journal
Hello I'm Jasmine, you can call me Jas or Jazz. Whatever, it doesnt matter to me. “Jaden” a voice called “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” it was a man calling ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
YAY NEW CHAPTER!!! ~~~~~~~ I was curled up on Mike’s chest, listening to the steady beat of his heart and the slight rise and fall of his chest. His arm ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Marked Ch. 2 pt.1
YAYAYAYAYAY here we go....! “We don’t know till I complete the Change.” I said. First of.. w00t w00t chapter two!!! haha Second, quickly remind the reader of whats going on ...
Oct 5, 2008
