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JamGalloway

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 52

    Hey, thanks for all the reviews you've been doing! I've been reading them, I just haven't replied. And yeah, I did take off a few paragraphs at the end because ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Chapter 3 - Why

    Oh, well I would love it if you *would* read it, lol. Over half of it is actually posted on here already actually. It's called Spruce Woods, has supernatural elements, ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Chapter 3 - Why

    Yeah, there's some parts in my story that I hated having to write, too. Not rape, but murder, and some talk of torture(I realize now how crazy my book must ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 52

    Thank you for the reviews! I'm not going to go respond to the other two because I'm a lazy piece of crap, but I absolutely read them. And honestly, I ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 20.2

    Ahh, yeah, I've had some chapters like that. Where people are like "why is this here" and I'm just like...you'll see. Patience, grasshopper. And I'm glad I gave you an ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 49

    No, you didn't offend me at all, and this is helpful! Thank you so much for doing it! And I hope you do choose to keep doing it cause I ...

    Jan 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 48

    Thank you so much for the review! And yeah, I realize my writing tends to get piled up in the greenroom sometimes because I don't separate my chapters to make ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 47

    Thank you so much! I would love it if you choose to review more of these, but that's up to you. I have around 15 I haven't even posted besides ...

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 49

    Yeah, I actually find those couple sentences about them being in the trees at the beginning funny, too, though for a different reason, lol. But I just left it for ...

    Dec 10, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Health Re: Picasso Idealizations

    That's good. Not you having an eating disorder, of course, but bringing it to the light. Also, I forgot to mention that I loved the title of this!

    Dec 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 47

    It's been awhile since I've been on here so you may have forgotten about this by now, but thank you for the review! I've been busy lately, but I should ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastlciff Series #1) - Chapter 43

    Thank you so much for the review! :)

    Nov 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 46

    Thank you!

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 46

    Thank you! I didn't even have the mention of her mom being Native American possibly being part of her sentence in the first draft, but I ended up adding it ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 44

    Yeah, pretty much all of these problems will be solved in the future so no worries. Thanks again!!!

    Oct 26, 2017


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