jamesMarcus

i will most definitely! thank you for the review. stay tuned for part two

HAHAHHAHAHHA! i remember alot of my friends who had short attention span......hey look a fly! ...maybe its growing on me

very true! here is a series of anger smileys: >I >( D< WOW IM LAME AT THIS BUT CLEARLY FANFICTION ISN'T!

thank you very much for the critiques and suggestions! i will definitely apply them and concentrate on the week parts. and as for the questions yeah i think i need ...

THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE! how do you do that??? >(.....

if you guys like the work then please "like" it if it is good enough!

You would probably call it my wrong turn but i say that it was fate for me to walk on that road again. That cold dark road that in my ...

......i really don't know what to say! that was really cute...i suppose for your age and i think you can improve because what you label you'r poem as must be ...

ahhh i remember this post! it was yet the longest smiley post ever!!!! i really like this post since everyone helped me out and i was new then. all the ...

well i certainly was involved in it! i think you have a good mind map that would lead you further in this story and what i like about writers is ...

hi! well you certainly asked for a review and here it is. i think the poem is well constructed and yet has a touch of evil in it. you have ...

wow, you already have so many reviews what do you need my point of view for! any way since you asked it, i should probably give it! a very natural, ...

hello i am James and here to go through this poetry of you'rs ! okay Captian Random i think it was a very touchy poem and thought full. you have ...

hello i am here to review! it was a wonderful combination of cooking and dancing. i think you need to high light the characters personality more. as in you have ...

why did everyone keep bugging me about the gear post? look i did not take these pictures so need for throwing investigatory questions Abbie! these i from photo bucket and ...