jake457

Well when it comes to grammer, I don't know whats the wrong or right way to do it :L so I'm not going to review that. I think you might ...

hey all whose read my lyrics, undertow and dont hate what you make (not links just felt like putting some bold text in lol) I haven't posted any lyrics on ...

Ah right, after a few melodies and singing through it, then checking the tempo.... I've edited the song, the emotion is still wavey, but not to extremes as this song ...

Ah thanks, :) I will put it in the right place from now on once i find the place. Also thanks for the support people and for my first reviewer, ...

Well in my opinion, peoms can never be too short, don't forget Hiakus. But yes, this is original for it's size I reckon lol. I love the emotional vibe from ...

ah ok :/ well 'bitches' is just used for me to amp the anger more than the sadness and it is kind of about a time of weakness also. But ...

lead here in the ditches fighting for too long all covered in stitches where did I go wrong why is this friendship gone Im sick of these bitches the same ...

EDITED ON MY PERSONAL FILES! :D

Im standing here Just wonder- ring ‘cause when I hear, Your stupid thoughts The same ol’ story It’s always is With you people [build up] Im getting sick of this ...