jaimemariexo

Thank You very much, your reviews are very helpful!

I really like this poem! I think you did a good job on your punctuation, it makes it a lot easier to understand and makes your poem better, so good ...

Thank you guys so much, you all are so helpful! :-] I edited it a bit, so should I replace the edited version with my old one?

This was honestly the first poem I’ve read that made me truly think about my political/personal views in such a way as your's did. I think that you did a ...

You speak, With the spotlight in your eyes, All you can see are falsities. The words you cast, Are dusting those empty hearts, With faux love. We must laugh, And ...

I liked the idea if the poem. However I did think that it lacked a bit of explanation and detail, maybe you should elaborate further with some of your lines, ...

I don’t like who I have become, It never use to be this way. My words are guns loaded to paper with a merciless trigger. I look at myself from ...