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Jackwynde with a quick review! This is great! You have excellent descriptions. You take time to give the character's inner monologue without ever getting trapped in it. You spend the ...

Hey there! Jackwynde here with a review. I liked this chapter, and I think the story has a lot of potential. You've got a detailed world that feels thought through. ...

*wakes up out of cryosleep* Hmm, this is very interesting. A bit of cat-and-mouse training. I really like the concept, and the mentorship/training could be a really powerful storytelling device ...

Hey! I like this quite a lot! The reader is dropped straight into a world that feels lovingly-crafted and has lots of possibilities. And the characters! I know some readers ...