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jacksrequiem

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Letter

    Okay, first, you shouldn't stop the action in the beginning of the story like that. My reaction was "Hey, the character is going to find something" then "What is going ...

    Apr 13, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Teeth, a horror story

    It is an okay story. Do you usually write with deux ex machina? It can be hard to pull off, so you should practice a lot if you want to ...

    Apr 10, 2008


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
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