jacksrequiem

The door to my small room burst open, slamming against the wall. I looked up from my book to find before my eyes the last person I wanted to see. ...

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I do like those books!!!! But I also recommend the ones about Daine, her godmother/aunt type person. In the Trickster series, she's the only who has the shapeshifter baby.

Okay, first, you shouldn't stop the action in the beginning of the story like that. My reaction was "Hey, the character is going to find something" then "What is going ...

Ok here goes: Yes, the beginning is somewhat dull, but the assignment was to base a story off a cover of The New Yorker mag, and the one I got ...

Certainly, love! I have now discovered that the 'pre' button doesn't lend itself to readers who actually want to read the story. Fancy that, someone who wants to read a ...

“There Are Far Worse Things Awaiting Man Than Death” –Dracula (1931) I stood in my small kitchen, holding the phone to my ear, only half listening to Serenla blather on ...

I like this poem very much. However, you have quite a bit of imagery in there, and if it weren't for the title, I would be quite lost. Without meaning, ...

It is an okay story. Do you usually write with deux ex machina? It can be hard to pull off, so you should practice a lot if you want to ...

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Being a writer and all, I often run into trouble when I want to edit my work or find what's wrong with it. This book saved my life! (Okay, figuratively, ...

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