jackle

Wow, I never noticed how odd some of my sentences sounded, thanks for pointing it out. About the phone thing, in Australia we call them "Mobile phones" and "Mobile" for ...

I am aware of wolf behaviour, haha. She's not really a wolf, she's a shape-shifter. It's more obvious in previous chapters, such as chapter 1 where you actually see a ...

hi thanks for all your help! :D will edit it when i find the time In general, I did like this, but it seems unfinished. I would love to read ...

needs more emotion. ok, she cried. tears of rage? self-pity? where is she? set the scene maybe. i like the end though. sorry thats all i have time for today