jDawn

Thanks everybody for the reviews, appreciate them.

Hello! I'm Jessica, here on request : D - First of all, I really thought this was adorable! It made me feel guilty about my animals I have at home, ...

Yeah sure I'll review it! I do poery, though it is kinda awkward to me. Oh well, I can manage. :D By the way, congrats on your poem being so ...

: D Hi again! I just have to let you know that my reiew was kinda harsh for my liking, sorry! I guess I was in a bad mood. Sorry ...

Okay, I'm back open for buisness! Drop by a request anytime! Thanks, Jessica

Well, First of all I'd love to say that you are a wonderful writer and I do love your work. It seemed to not flow really nice. The word choice ...

Thanks, the critique is good too! =) Why thank you! : ) And no problem. And no worries, he's up in the clouds at Jesus's side. Watching over you! He's ...

I'm no expert on divorce but a lot of my very close friends parent's are divorced. My friend's parents never really got along well. But their oldest child is fourteen. ...

Aww! I'm so sorry! That's a really nice poem. : ) Key Red- Nice, though could have been written a little differently Green- I loved it Note- I'm used to ...

Mine's nothing special really. American I guess. Though at times I do tend to talking like I'm from England and I'm not sure why, though it does happen quite a ...

Hi again! It's Jessica here. First of all, again, I loved the idea. There is a theory of the world ending in 2012 and you twisted it up and your ...

The real ending was much like this I just added a struggle to get to shore.

hehe thank you! Yeah, I worked on just that little piece for days, that was part of a huge project that was most of my grade. : ) Thanks, Jessica

Thank you. And yes, I haven't been working extremely hard on this one and I'll try and edit this when I can. Thanks again! - Jessica

Hi! Well, this is a new story I wrote and wanted to get some critiques so rip it apart! I appreciate any suggestions for the title, thanks! Oh, and I ...