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Thanks for all the suggestions, I appreciate them so much!

Aloha! I'd love it if you'd review this, I see you have another request on your hands and I don't need it asap just whenever you get time works! Sky ...

I write this with inspiration from Adam Young's "Sky Sailing" Hope you like it! Also, the reason some of the similes and wordings are awkward is because I wrote this ...

Alrighty then. Thanks for the review! ; ) I haven't got a chance to edit much and yep, my grammar sucks. : D And yeah about the expensive telescope, it's ...

Hi! This is Jessica! 15 minutes left before the start of the classes. Try and always write out your numbers. “Hey”, I said when she saw me. The comma should ...

Aloha! It's Jessica here, and I'm here to review this. First of all, this sounds more like part of a preface than a prolouge. Just wanted to let you know ...

sock monkey- socky, it's a good thing hehe : )

Aloha! Tis' Jessie, the rubber ducky! : D I really like this, I think it has tons of potential and I enjoyed it. It didn't exactly keep my attention the ...

*sobs* I miss you then! : D only kidding, just wanted to say hi socky!

Thanks!

Okay, so I started this new piece, and I realize it's awkward... : ) Enjoy and feel free to rip it apart. Also, is this too long for a chapter? ...

Aloha! Tis' Jessica! And I'm here to review this wonderful piece of yours. By the way, welcome to Young Writers Society! :smt003 "Are you Cassandra Emerson?" the nurse on the ...

Well done, I like this a lot. It was pretty and well writing. Nice job : ) Keep writing, I really enjoyed this! - Jessica

Finished! : D

Thanks ( I was bored one day, wrote then typed quickly, sorry some of you didn't enjoy it. ) : ) A pricker? Uh, slang sorta thing for thorn? My ...