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  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Thanks, for this and all the other reviews you've done for me. : ) Appreciate them!

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    okay, thanks!

    Oct 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter Two

    Thanks!

    Oct 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter One

    Chapter Two- I just posted it! : D

    Oct 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter Two

    Alright, so if you haven't read the first chapter I suggest you do because it'll make a lot more sense. Also, if you'd like you could follow Morphia's page- Bette ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Hey everybody! First of all, feel free to rip this apart. : ) I'm working on adding lenth and it's going into extreme editing so I'll have the revision replacing ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Faerie-ism

    I don't think it's really that bad. I personally loved your opening sentence and it looks alright to me so far : ) I hope you keep going with this. ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Day In The Life Of A Rubber Duck

    This is so sweet, Kenzie! I think everybody else before me has covered everything, so all I have to say is I can't wait untill you post the rest!

    Oct 2, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter One

    Thanks a bunches! I'll definatly work on editing, I actually finished the next chapter but haven't got a chance to post it... Anyway, thanks again! - Jessica

    Sep 28, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring on the stories, I'm ready!

    Hola! I'm back! Thanks for reviewing Sky Sailing by the way! I'm here again with another request, nothing urgent just whenever you find time! Thank you so much in advance! ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Untitled Chapter One

    Thanks!

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Taboo [11]

    I just now found out about this, and this is amazing! You're a great writer by the way and I don't have anything negative to say about this! Great job, ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: [Cool title goes here]

    Hey, I'm Jessica, and welcome to YWS. Corrections Are In Red, by the way! his short brown hair motionless in the wind. I really don't think we need all these ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Darkness Thickens (excerpt)

    Howdy! Tis' Jessica, and I'll be reviewing The Darkness Thickens. I just have a few opinions and nitpicks for you so here goes nothing. Overall, your detail is great as ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Sky Sailing

    Alrighty, thank you!

    Sep 18, 2010


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