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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog in the Garden (Chapter One)

    Hi! I'm Jessica, and I'll be second to review "Fog In The Garden" First of all, I agree with Lily that this is wild. It's all too fast, and remember ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Laundry Basket

    I wrote this for ultraviolet's contest. We were supposed to write about an object, and I got assigned to a Laundry Basket! I'm not to pround of this.. yet. So, ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three

    Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

    Sure, and just wanted to let you know that I have been reading A Shot Of Arrogance all along. : D Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    I'll try and edit this, and add on to it too. Thanks to everybody who reviewed!!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Awesome, thank you!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    Why not? Here you go; Hatched Chapter One... Thanks in advance! - Jessica

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^

    Hey Skins! I just wanted to say I really like this! Your an awesome drawer and I could never draw like that, not even close. It's very detailed and I ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

    Would Anybody Like A Review??

    Oct 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter Two

    Okay, thanks! I'll definatly work on that, and sorry it sounded so cliche. : )

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Supernova ) Okay! Thank you, and I'll be sure to use your advice while writing the following chapters. Dahanain13 ) Thanks a bunch and welcome to YWS by the way! ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Army (BVB)

    Wow, nice one! This is really intense and super real, I love it and I can't stop reading it over and over again! *clicks like button* - Jessica

    Oct 7, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: For anyone who just wants a review!

    Hey, would you mind reviewing "Hatched Chapter One" for me? Thanks in advance!

    Oct 7, 2010


Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening