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Re: Fog in the Garden (Chapter One)
Hi! I'm Jessica, and I'll be second to review "Fog In The Garden" First of all, I agree with Lily that this is wild. It's all too fast, and remember ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Laundry Basket
I wrote this for ultraviolet's contest. We were supposed to write about an object, and I got assigned to a Laundry Basket! I'm not to pround of this.. yet. So, ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Sure, and just wanted to let you know that I have been reading A Shot Of Arrogance all along. : D Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
I'll try and edit this, and add on to it too. Thanks to everybody who reviewed!!
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
Awesome, thank you!
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Why not? Here you go; Hatched Chapter One... Thanks in advance! - Jessica
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^
Hey Skins! I just wanted to say I really like this! Your an awesome drawer and I could never draw like that, not even close. It's very detailed and I ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Would Anybody Like A Review??
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Morphia Chapter Two
Okay, thanks! I'll definatly work on that, and sorry it sounded so cliche. : )
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
Supernova ) Okay! Thank you, and I'll be sure to use your advice while writing the following chapters. Dahanain13 ) Thanks a bunch and welcome to YWS by the way! ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: The Army (BVB)
Wow, nice one! This is really intense and super real, I love it and I can't stop reading it over and over again! *clicks like button* - Jessica
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: For anyone who just wants a review!
Hey, would you mind reviewing "Hatched Chapter One" for me? Thanks in advance!
Oct 7, 2010
