jDawn

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay! Anyway, onto the review. Your story is interesting so far, but my only compliant if you spaced out some of the ...

All I saw was darkness. A forest full of darkness. The black trees whistled and shivered in the intense wind. I kept walking. Lightning burst from the clouds as the ...

I thought it was really great! It took me some time to read but I really couldn't stop myself. It was new and exciting as well as intense and gripping. ...

Chapter One My face slammed into the steering wheel as the car crashed hard into the tree. Blood dripped into my eyes from the new raw wound on my forehead. ...