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Re: Hatched [ 1 ] *Revised Version*
Alright, thanks a bunch!
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
Thanks, and yes I posted the revison!
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}
This is really sweet, I didn't catch on to why all Barry's words were in italics until towards the end. : D Nicely done, I enjoyed it!
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Hatched [ 1 ] *Revised Version*
Thanks!
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: carbonCore's reviewRequests
Hey, I'm Jessica... jDawn. Anyway, would you mind reviewing this first chapter for me, thanks in advance!
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: For anyone who just wants a review!
Wonderin' if you could review my revision of Hatched? Thanks in advance!
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Hatched [ 1 ] *Revised Version*
Hey guys, this is the revised version of hatched, I hope it's a little better than the draft! :smt001 And again, I will extend this A.S.A.P. Page- A crack spread ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 2 [Snowflake]
Hey! Jessica here for a review! The hail hurled everything as far as I could see. This sounds odd to me, try wording it a bit differently, though only a ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hey! I'm here for my review, as requested! I think my fellow reviewers have already covered everything, grammar wise, so I hope I don't repeat anything else. Characters I think ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Iceprincess's Royal Reviews :D [Currently accepting!]
Hey! Review this for me? Thanks!
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Finished! Awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 1
Hey! It's Jessica here at your request. First of all, I must say this blew me away, and I'm not just saying that. It's written really detailed and your writings ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Finished! And Skins, sorry I couldn't find anything! ; D I think that's a good thing!
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Laundry Basket
okay! Thanks to both of you!
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eleven)
Hey Skins, I'm here for my review. Although I think everybody above me already covered everything I see, grammar wise. Lucky me : ) No, just kidding. First of all, ...
Oct 17, 2010
