jDawn

I'll check it out... when you post it! lolz :smt003

I love your super hero idea (could probably tell from my name). I myself am writing a story about kids with powers however its totally different. I liked the characters ...

I really like the first two! They're light, springy, and fun! Great drawings! I really like them, very fashionable! I really liked all of them! Keep drawing!

Hi! I was wondering if you could please reveiw the first chapter of my novel. It is called The Hunt. It's Fanasy, but not completly. There is no rush at ...

All finished! thanks for stopping by! I'm open anytime! : )

Hello! I am Jessica and am here on request to review this piece today! Overall I didn't catch any grammar or spelling mistakes. That's good. It's a happy day for ...

Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing your novel today! I would just liked to say that I thought it was really good. i hope you write ...

Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing Firecrow today! First of all, I think the story has potential though I wasn't completely getting the whole thing. It could ...

Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! I am going to start with grammar and spelling mistakes. The mistakes are explained after each line. : ) ...

First Of All, Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing Journey Of A Dead Man Today! I thought that it was a bit short to be able to ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jessica and I will be reviewing The Message today! I thought the details were beautiful and made me feel like I was really there. But ...

Yes! I started the Sight a month ago and didn't get to finish it. It is on my summer reading list! Thanks! Thanks For The Review on Dream Walker too ...

Yes, I do agree with Sam up there. The first sentence needs to make the reader want to read more. You need a really gripping beginning to stay with the ...

Hello Everyone! I'm jdawn ( Jessica ) here and if you need a review on a piece of writing... then post a request here! I'll do it for free in ...

Yes, It is about Wolves. Not so much werewolfs though. Thank you very much! I'll work on those! Thanks! :D And yes, it is only part of the first chapter. ...