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Re: Calypso's Island
Thank You! Good Luck To You Too! - Jessica
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Calypso's Island
Calypso's Island A Retelling Of Odysseus's Journey At Calypso's Island From Odysseus's Point Of View. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: I'm here to Help
Hi! I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my novel- The Hunt. No rush on the review at all. Thank you, Jessica :smt003
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Lucy The Whisperer
The sharp prickers poked and pinched at my ankles, and I winced. I ignored it and kept my eyes peeled for the white and fluffy hare. I glanced sideways and ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Watchers Book One: Counting Stars - Prologue (edited)
Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing this piece today! Overall, I thought it was okay. You have an interesting style of writing. The story could go ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The Fallen Angel:Prologue
Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this piece today. By the way, welcome to the YWS! Hope you enjoy your time here. First of all, I liked ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Creek: The Quest Chapter One
Yeah, that one sentence was wrong and should have been me. : 0 Thanks for the review, I appreciate it much. -Jessica
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Lyric (I don't have a title so...)
Hello! I am Jessica and here to review this story as asked! First of all, I liked it a lot. I think you are a very wonderful writer! Where are ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )
Attention Customers! I will be gone until Saturday due to a camp. I will be taking review requests once again on Saturday. If you leave a request, You will be ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Blackout Forever -- Chp. 1-Part 1
Hello! I am Jessica and here to review Blackout Forever today! First of all, I thought the plot was really good. The story has a lot of potential and i ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Creek: The Quest Chapter One
Thank you very much for the review! That helps a bunch! Also, Yes, i have read the Warriors Series! The other one is on my summer reading list, too. Thanks, ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Bluelight: Chapter 1
Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! Okay, there is a bunch for me to work with but not much i have to say. I ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11
Okay! I thought you sounded almost like Max but It sounded a little bit that you were trying a bit to hard to sound like Max. It made it a ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Prologue/Chapter 1
Hello! Welcome to YWS! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! First of all, I really think the story has potential! I think your writing could be ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Blue Prints Chapter Two
Chapter Two A few minutes later we met up with Tabatha. The little 11 year old had made her way to a gas station down the road. She was waiting ...
Jul 12, 2010