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Re: Chapter 1- New
Hi. This was good. But there's a slight spoil. :) like my called me twenty five years ago. I think you missed a word. “Yea it’s there” I replied Watch ...
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Re: Princess Aaron Chapter 2
Hi. Just a quick review. :) The sun was finally awake. And so was Aaron . She only managed to get another couple of hours sleep, but she had to ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth (Chapter 1 part Two)
Hi. First of all, I'd like to say your composition was good. I like the way you describe the settings in detail. My room was painted a deep, sea blue, ...
Sep 2, 2011
