irsyad23

The second chapter of Moonlight is currently on progress. Sorry because I clicked 'Submit' 2 time. Please read Moonlight Chapter 1

Malvera Town, 1890. The moon shone brighter than ever. Two men, tall with muscular figure strolled quietly beside the moonlit lane. They’ve expected no one would notice them. The ‘Secret ...

He saw a dead crow, in a drain, near the post office. He saw an old man gasping for air and a baby barely able to breath in a crowded ...

Hi. Nice poem you wrote. I love the imagery... Tear Drops Tear Drops Always Fall Repitition is just a wonderful style. Also, you managed to follow the same rhymes... Keep ...

Writers deliver their stories — fiction and nonfiction alike — to readers more effectively when they use appearances of people, places, and things to help drive the narrative and illuminate ...

Hi. I love the way you tell the story. But it was less detailed. :) I walked between the stalls of fabric and jewels, talking to each stall owner, looking ...

Hi. This was good. But there's a slight spoil. :) like my called me twenty five years ago. I think you missed a word. “Yea it’s there” I replied Watch ...

Hi. Just a quick review. :) The sun was finally awake. And so was Aaron . She only managed to get another couple of hours sleep, but she had to ...

Hi. My first impression upon seeing these pictures was like "Amazing!" I love the way you edit the image where some parts are blur and some are clear. For the ...

Priceless: thanks for the comments is possible if u help me to proof read my story before i post it here . if u wouldn't mind :) LindsayG: Thanks , ...

I got the picture of this poem and it is nor much detailed. It was good. Keep om writing.

Stone Soup for soul Beautiful morning in the City of La Paz, there is one man walking slowly around the alley searching and scavenging for leftover from the houses and ...

Hi. First of all, I'd like to say your composition was good. I like the way you describe the settings in detail. My room was painted a deep, sea blue, ...

How can i review others work? I tried by clicking reply at the bottom but i never get point for that. Help me, im new

Very good. Keep on writing. Maybe make your sentences a bit longer. Farewell.