irsyad23

I personally like your idea. It is of drama/romance genres which is quite interesting. But this is quite a cliche idea, but cliche idea can be very interesting if you ...

Guys, I just want to tell you that if you are interested, check out the previous chapters on just click on each chapter to read. Actually the is a problem ...

Chapter 5 Malvera Town, 1890 Rufus didn’t know if he had to shoot or not. He heard footsteps. He lowered his gun, pointing it to the ground. “It’s time to ...

Hi... This was a great read! You skill of writing and giving descriptions were marvelous. I liked it very much. You used many bombastic expressions which was good. :) I ...

Hi there... First of all I'd like to welcome you to Young Writer Society. There's a few things you should remember before posting your stories here. First of all, the ...

Hey guys.. Just for your information. I found out the words “blond” and “blonde” are not wholly synonymous. So what’s the difference between the words “blond” and “blonde”? (besides

Chapter 4 Malvera Town, 1851. Will, the new hunter shot at the enemy continuously. He reloaded his gun with Lionfang Bullets before taking aim again. The cold atmosphere in the ...

Hi... Here's to review... First of all, I like the your idea of dragon and wolf, which was new. But I found there are many errors. As I lay in ...

Beautiful. You have master the technique. :)

Chapter 3 Malvera Town, 1851 “I am going out tonight.” A man informed his wife, who was busy sewing. The cottage they lived in was just perfect for the couple, ...

Hi.. Here's to review! First of all, it was a good poem. I like the way you use many style in writing poem, which make your poem looks professional. I ...

Hi.. Here's to review. First of all, this was good. I like the way you use complex sentences, such as; Power and status radiated off of the master, much like ...

Chapter 2 Rufus walked hastily through the forest, alone. He’d dreamed about Tom’s where about. Based on his instinct, he was sure going to the right path. “Stay away from ...

Hi there! Here's to review... It was dark times in the faraway lands of Zurrak. The sun grew weaker day by day and many stars from the night sky blinked ...

The dead crow symbolize how terrible the condition at that time. Even the dirty birds like that will die because of pollution... :) ... I'm just telling... :)